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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2005-06-09 01:36 AM


Prime Time Sublime
(Part of: “Emmanel Endorphin’s Serotonin Sundae”)
By: Noah Eaton
6/5/05

Daughters of Neptune, sons of Jupiter,
step on up, don’t be shy,
all dashboards will become washboards,
so set your stargazers on stun tonight!
Hey, hey, you’re jest in time,
Topper Todd & Li Li Zucchini,
love will boast by the end of this merry evening,
“Vini, Vidi, Vici!”

Look down 4th Avenue, here come the Bubblegum Spiderweb Temperament,
with the Kids Will Be Kids! Choir chant-leading this star-soaked parade,
with Mindy Melisma waving away in her butterscotch sundae float,
followed closely behind by an ice cream spaceship brigade!
Here comes Sweetcheeks Grand Marshal Ciscoe Wentzell,
free-wheeling away on his floral Pinky-Slinky bicycle,
with the Dolly-Olly Orchards playing buttercups and tilt-a-whirls,
cycling in the streets like its Chenga World!

The way you want to rejoice is your choice,
jazz those hands and raise your voice!

Prime time sublime,
Prime time sublime
Prime time sublime
Prime time sublime!

Here come the Folleti Canaries, chanting in ultrasoprano,
fluting rainbow oboes and mini-harps down Primrose Road,
ooohhhh, look at that, atop the Cottingley Cottage in the flash,
Nanny Buttoncap and her illustrious highness Queen Mab,
flinging mead wine pectin candy along the cherry orchard strewn route,
the wine of women’s wisdom and ancient folklore painting faces a light rouge,
hey, that galactic goddess is cute, who’s this sweet nymphet,
it’s none other than our atomic, supersonic belle, Vulpecula Vixen!

The way you want to rejoice is your choice,
jazz those hands and raise your voice!

Prime time sublime,
Prime time sublime
Prime time sublime
Prime time sublime!

Radio operator to the tower, U.D.O’s coming in for a landing,
drifting in with its Green Cheese Convoy for an interplanetary tanning,
Shuttiwoo Shellycoat’s lookin’ for that newest wrinkle,
while Gelasia Monkeyflower fishes the sidewalks gettin’ every grin to twinkle.
what’s that beating in the heart of the Tiki Tiki Trolly,
it’s the South Sea Sugar Shack Gotu Kola, goody goody golly,
"Dance isn't something that can be explained in words; it has to be danced."
Bodies never lie, and in life’s natural order may we all be entranced,
ha ha ha!

The way you want to rejoice is your choice,
jazz those hands and raise your voice!

Prime time sublime,
Prime time sublime
Prime time sublime
Prime time sublime!

After hours make beginnings of much of life’s melody,
why stop now, the night is young, let’s escalate the jamboree!
"Ahoy, maties, I’m Commodore Celandine,
I’ve swaggered to sh-arrrrrrr on my celestial cruiseline!"
Look, even Mother Carey’s chickens are flappin’ their wings,
oh my, the crowd’s going wild, here comes the one who put zing into this evening,
Emmanuel Endorphin, the most roseate of Sweetcheeks,
the streets are yours now, go nuts, your turn to show what your love brings...

The way you want to rejoice is your choice,
jazz those hands and raise your voice!

Prime time sublime,
Prime time sublime
Prime time sublime
Prime time sublime!

("Vini, Vidi, Vici!"

made you look, hee hee!)


"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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1 posted 2005-06-09 04:41 AM


Noah, just wanted you to know that I don't always reply to your stuff, but I do read, and I just love this series...


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2 posted 2005-06-09 09:11 AM



To
Emmanuel Endophin

Flowers And Hearts

With love
Vulpecula Vixen
Heart Beat

bslicker
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3 posted 2005-06-11 02:54 AM


enjoyed Noah
bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Margherita
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4 posted 2005-06-11 05:03 PM


....this star-soaked parade

You always surprise with your brilliant  creations, dear Noah.

Love, Margherita



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5 posted 2005-06-15 12:03 PM


Sweet Angel O' Mine...your happiness inspires tears to purge themselves from my eyes.  Your spirit has again touched me.  I never tire of reading...nay...dancing to your rhythmic lyric.  All I can say is love runs through every word I feel in your floetry.

Keep dancin', sweety!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

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