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J. K. Mitchell
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0 posted 2005-06-08 12:16 PM



I remember strong arms pulling me close
Holding me tenderly
Kissing me gently
I remember a strong masculine scent
Filling my nose and reminding me of you
And all those little things you used to do
I remember passion
Burning brilliantly between you and I
Flames so hot, I cared not if I died
I remember love
So high that it could not be overcome
Overshadowed or overrun
I remember you
My love, my life, my heart
I remember everything right from the start
I remember and I long for more...





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SimplyGold
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1 posted 2005-06-08 12:21 PM


The wonder and magic of love captured here. I keep my eyes wide open just in case it should come around again!  Very nice, enjoyed.

SG

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2005-06-08 12:22 PM




wonderful!  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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3 posted 2005-06-08 12:58 PM


That is what I like about past romance, it keeps those desires alive for more!  Great writing.


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Sunshine
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4 posted 2005-06-08 02:22 PM



J.K...

it's been awhile!

But the sentiments of your writing
stir the soul as strong as ever...

Thank you!

D.Lester Young
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5 posted 2005-06-08 05:37 PM


Nicely worded reflection upon verse
passing shadows
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6 posted 2005-06-09 04:30 AM


one never really forgets, even if it's painful to remember sometimes
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