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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-06-08 08:48 AM


your last “i love you”
becomes our first
again and again…

pretty little thief, you are
heart of sky, running wild in me
like a feral cougar
flesh sings orally
of yellow corn &
sacrificial mountains

the many masks
become acts of courage
climbing the world tree
together, meeting
avenues of redemptions
eventides, become packrats
opening all those doors with shadows
interlinking my somedays
likewise, unconsciousness

i recall & he is there
mythological motifed lover
outward antagonism
leading my eve
on a journey with a close friend
we possess a valor to go ahead
together...my animus

wake up, wake up
my veritable hermes
impregnating me with libido

searching for treasures
in putrid sewage
global truths of my unworthiness
surface...

together we share human nature
dimensions of singular differences
playing tug of war
then passionately kissing to make up

with the emotional big 5
interpersonal and full of dimensions
meet me on the other side
come hither my delicate comatose
you phantom, and ghostly life force
vampire of my soul
you are the right left side of me
I’m your Dora Maar Seated

But ahhh, I’ve learned how to say NO!
To my beloved Yahweh
thinking for myself, is not in your
own best interest
It is no longer me you possess
My dearest sweet collective animus….

Here, take my hand,
together
lets open the next door...
shall we?
animum/masculine side of a woman's unconscious mind, anima is the male's feminine side of his mind....perhaps sometimes, even our muse


this is a poem, written from reoccuring dreams
I've experienced over the entire period of my life
we, are in a large Victorian house...I do not see
his face, but he's there, and I'm comfortable
and know we've known each other for a long long time...
We are amazed while walking from room to room, as this home is very large, one room, leading into another room, thru a door

endless doors, with rooms behind...the home is furnished in period early 1800's and my dream is in color...we walk thru a door into a green house...we are overwhelmed, and know we've got to purchase this house

He, is the man of my dreams...he is there constantly with me...he is...my animus (wink)



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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-06-08 08:52 AM


together we share human nature
dimensions of singular differences
playing tug of war
then passionately kissing to make up


Particularly enjoyed this part Lee.
Odd, I just had a dream the other night which I rarely ever do dream...but I remember no faces or voices, just a total feeling of being at peace....comfortable...

so who knows? Dont ask, but for some reason the dream is sticking with me.  

Enjoyed your art here lady.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-06-08 09:35 AM


Thank you for sharing this dream, m'friend...
I have a few of my own that bear interpretation...
that you are comfortable with this person,
of course,
speaks a lot of where you are
in your life, now...

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-06-08 10:33 AM


enjoyed the insight and the feelings shared -dreams can be a comfort in their own right - sometimes I meet my mother there and it is as if truly we shared moments together -

much enjoyed this LeeJ - Hugs this morning   Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

babygirlwlove
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4 posted 2005-06-08 11:28 AM


there is such an inner strength in this....

wow

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-06-08 12:27 PM


Perhaps a peek into the distant past to what once was? ~ and may be again. But hopefully each door will open into glorious new vistas for you and your phantom lover...

"my veritable hermes
impregnating me with libido"

~ now that's my kinda dreamin'!

I thoroughly enjoyed this peak into your dream world ~ or is it? Flirty


Linda


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6 posted 2005-06-08 12:33 PM


dreams..and rain.. seem to be universal or at least a common thread in many of the words I have read..

nicely done ma'am.. this does sit well on the mind and on the page..

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-06-09 12:47 PM


Enjoyed...James
Honeybunch
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8 posted 2005-06-09 01:48 AM


Leej - Thank you for sharing this.  You write so well that which I so well understand.
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