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Susan Caldwell
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0 posted 06-07-2005 03:03 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Susan Caldwell


This nefarious night
beckons a side of me
that longs for the touch of your intellect.
Morphing me
into something far more worthy.

This, the dark night
screams for you to teach me
of things I never knew.
Things of skin against skin
slick with the perspiration
of lustful greed.

A lust born from your eyes
with the knowledge that leaks forth
in the form of peaceful resolution.
Knowing this is more
than the primal thrust
of urgency and selfish need.

It is a merging
of two negative forces
begot from the loins of a world of wounds
inflicted by forked tongues.

Two negatives
that remit a light
on this, a nefarious night.


"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

© Copyright 2005 Susan Caldwell - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 06-07-2005 03:25 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

"It is a merging
of two negative forces
begot from the loins of a world of wounds
inflicted by forked tongues."

smile

sounds like a conception to me...a big bang perhaps?



loved this, you
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 06-07-2005 04:32 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

interesting write..ad a bit different for you Ma'am... but good...and seasoned well with elements that pique the taste..

enjoyed... as usual
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 06-08-2005 08:05 AM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

kind of sinister but sweet
the temptations of the night
very cool write
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 06-08-2005 08:09 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

yes Susan, this screams of the touch of something much deeper than just the need....

extremely well done with this one lady!

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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5 posted 06-08-2005 09:03 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I usually don't admit this, but I had to pull out the dictionary...cool word

thoughts well penned indeed
Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 06-08-2005 09:08 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Karen...lol..yes a conception for sure, especially for me.

Ron... different? yes..but it was inspired.

Michele...thank you muchly!

Donna...exactly...much.

Dixie...lol..it was a new word for me, the person that spoke it had to tell me what it meant, then I promptly said, "I like it, I am going to use it."  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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7 posted 06-08-2005 03:39 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Wow..love this one Susan!
I know that need of which you speak..
It's one that is really hard to explain..
but, you described it perfectly.
Hugs lovely lady~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Janet Marie
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8 posted 06-08-2005 05:32 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

This nefarious night
beckons a side of me
that longs for the touch of your intellect.
Morphing me
into something far more worthy.

This, the dark night
screams for you to teach me
of things I never knew.
Things of skin against skin
slick with the perspiration
of lustful greed.

A lust born from your eyes
with the knowledge that leaks forth
in the form of peaceful resolution.
Knowing this is more
than the primal thrust
of urgency and selfish need.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Well this just flat out rocks!
I loved and so understand the truth your first verse speaks of....that connection of minds is as intense as one of physical...
and yepppers... that nefarious allit rocks too.

very very cool poem Susan.
Ericc
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9 posted 06-09-2005 04:57 PM       View Profile for Ericc   Email Ericc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ericc

Great write Susan!

Eric
Susan Caldwell
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10 posted 01-18-2008 09:33 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Ever go back and review your old stuff?  you know you do...

This one leaves me shaking my head now...I remember what and who it was about and I am back now to say that intellectual connection alone doesn't fill the glass..

It is impossible to get everything you need from one person.

That is what I have learned.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

 
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