»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #35
»
dawn on south wall still life
| Open Poetry #35 |
|
dawn on south wall still life |
|
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
|
they couldn't have been a better fit those parts you brought for my puzzle party and the ends of them I didn't know where to start or how long to take to get beyond them but it came to me suddenly like ice cream when it melts into shimmer down the back of one's hands that you knew the answers all along and were just saving yourself for the screwdown to be the dream I wanted stuck to my walls like sunlight _______________ dark |
||
| © Copyright 2005 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
but it came to me suddenly like ice cream when it melts into shimmer down the back of one's hands yuppers, love is like that...sometimes...and becomes something miraculous, strong, causing such individual self examinations...tremendous form your in this a.m. Hugs to ya |
||
|
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
to be the dream I wanted stuck to my walls like sunlight I'm melting to the beauty of these words. Love, Margherita  |
||
|
babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
stuck to my walls like sunlight oh hell yeah~ **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
||
|
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
smiling at your view this morning d - you do know how to leave one savoring the visuals and exercising their imaginings -  SIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
||
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's funny when you want to pick a favorite part and you just can't...lol all of this...is my favorite part! and now I am craving ice cream....  |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Even in sunlight, shadows beckon... excellent wordplay, Sir. |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You just managed to startle me into reverie...y'poet you! |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ladyganglovelies, you bless me with the reads...am pleased that it was a sooth for the thoughts |
||
MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you do fill a ladys mind with sensual thoughts and visions that, i will just say thanks for the smile My spirit will rise |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
