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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there at your eyes now I see the edges of a blushed reaction but a hunger too to feed a bit longer on the images of suggestion you say the round room sooths but makes you ache that room of spirits where the woman of you feels like a stranger being seduced with you watching and you say you hate mirrors when they show your smiles happening without control and reveal you helpless to stop the feelings that have touched your core beyond the dream places and you know there is even more ________________ dark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it is a sad place, when a woman gives her faith and trust, and men have abandoned her, used her as a trophy... You've got your work cut out for you with this one... Hugs Morning D...  |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
lovely bit of seduction in this~ **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ladies..for the reads.. perhaps a lady at a gym at 4 in the morning lee J? (grin)shhhh don't tell _______________ bbg, sure is nice to see you back..thanks lil one [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-06-2005 08:34 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"and you say you hate mirrors when they show your smiles happening without control and reveal you helpless to stop the feelings that have touched your core beyond the dream places" ~ I have a feeling that you have that kind of power over a woman! It would be difficult for someone of the fairer sex to hide her inner feelings from a man who sees all ~ because he looks! ~ with both eyes and heart. You have a knowing and it's showing!  Have a glorious day, Tall Dark & Handsome!  EA |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms EA, now you are blushing me..thanks lady for the review. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow! you see with a much clearer vison than most men D this is awesome  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks suesea...always a pleasure to watch |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Excellent.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
nice ms nine, thanks to you lady |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Yes, very nice! Sometimes fear keeps us from realizing what we already know. Nice write! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Smiling here D -  SIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
yes Ms K fear is lovely caution is sensual unraveling is heavenly ________________ hi susin..thanks for the moments and the considerations |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well I had forgotten how sensually you write. Much enjoyed, and understood. Sandra |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"to stop the feelings that have touched your core" the edge of reason for sure. ah yes, I would agree that you look with both eyes...you have to do to be able to do what you do... (see? I do get to respond now and then letting you know that I haven't forgotten you) "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kittymoon, thank to you lady, have missed your ink here _________- susanC, hmmmmmmm you bless me with the eyes and the giggle fingers, thank you lady |
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