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Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
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between space and time

0 posted 2005-06-04 02:40 PM


I can't see my way out of this abyss
thoughts raging     my abyss
heart breaking      dark abyss
mind rotting   have you seen this abyss?
I think not   yet i don't know what to think
I just fall lower    and lower
   into my abyss...


5-22-05

"I don't know who or where i am
but i also can't see why
but if i didn't laugh alot
i'd probably always cry"
- Kaos

© Copyright 2005 Michael Lentini - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2005-06-04 06:27 PM


It's dark in this abyss ... but it's in the abyss that the longing for Light is the strongest ... and the answers come.

You expressed this abyss powerfully.

Love, Margherita


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