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aRiEsAnGeL Member
since 2004-03-04
Posts 53Florida |
No- Its not that i didnt trust you It was my problems that buried me whole. No- I never wanted you you to leave me but thats the way it is Im gonna have to find some way to deal with this Yes- I took the pictures of you down today I wanted to forget your beautiful face so i tucked them so far away,never to be seen again Yes- I still love you,but you broke my heart and my soul Ive become very numb,but very ammune to the things that you say and do No- I will not expect a call from you nor a visit I am nothing but dust in the wind you have a life without me now,so live it! No- dont remember me dont even remember the times we shared just remember what you said and the way i felt |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Naomi, with these beautiful and wise words you soothe your heart and touch the reader. What has been has been ... you look forward and that's great. Love, Margherita  |
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aRiEsAnGeL Member
since 2004-03-04
Posts 53Florida |
thank you so so much.That means a lot to me.Love and hugs to you.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Naomi~ Great emotional word-vent, sweets~ "Forward ever ... backwards never Within ourselves our future lies" That was my high school class motto ... it still rings true~ Keep the poetry working for you~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Naomi, thank you for posting. I know these feelings that you've written. I love you, my baby girl...hang in there. One day, love will find you...and keep you. love, mom |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
hello Naomi ... can't explain reasons why why sometimes we have to cry but when we do we seem to know that it helps us, helps us grow ... ... a good title would be IN DECISIVE hold on ... life is just starting!! x CRAIG o |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
A write that hits a very real chord. Strong emotions. Honest facing for those feelings. A very healing poem. Thanks for sharing your journey so that others could heal with you. never try to teach a pig to sing |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Very good Naomi, Best to you, martyjo |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
felt your anguish and the last line read poignant. hugs and i hope things get better for you soon. |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
I love this. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
and the healing will begin from here on in Hope |
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