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Open Poetry #35

Breeze

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2005-06-02 12:11 PM

breeze,
summer print dress
dances around you

as the insolent wind
interrogates your curves
and cools your heat —

I envy his brazenness...
(just for a moment)

— then ride with the wind...

CG

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-06-02 12:18 PM

good piece!

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

2 posted 2005-06-02 12:31 PM

Excellent

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-06-02 12:55 PM

WOW!!!!!!! EXCELLENT!
I'm keeping this!!!!!!!
Left me speechless, ya did!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

4 posted 2005-06-02 01:21 PM

very good. enjoyed. marty

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