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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2005-06-02 11:32 AM



I'm stuck
swirling in space
someplace
without a trace
or comprehension
of time.

Days go by
time passes
surpasses
thought,
and I end up
where I've begun.

Suspended,
in place,
someplace.

WhiteRose 06/02/05


"fit to be tied"

© Copyright 2005 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-06-02 11:36 AM


hello friend! I've been missing you!

now I know where you've been...
suspended

this sounds sad but sometimes it's the best place to be for a time...at least you're hanging in there


WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2005-06-02 01:01 PM


Hi Dixie..I've been around, following the twists and turns in the road..sometimes I get lost.
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2005-06-02 02:56 PM


WhiteRose~
Oh ... this one knows me !!!
Some days I just hope someone finds me
and let's me know where I am~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
4 posted 2005-06-02 03:44 PM


Thanks for reading Marge.
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
5 posted 2005-06-03 11:02 PM


Welcome!
So very nice to read you again.
Liked the thought of suspended...like time out, but with color TV.  
Well done.
TD

Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2005-06-04 04:26 AM


Dear Anne, I love these words, they  describe very well a situation in which we all find ourselves at times. Suspended ... yes!

And the new photo is very lovely!

Love, Margherita

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2005-06-04 08:00 PM


me too me too
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2005-06-04 08:17 PM


Dear Rose of White ~

I could sense the swirling and twirling of your delicate petals in a downward spiral...

You and your poetry have been missed.

~ and might I add that this is my favourite photo of you to date! Very lovely!

Warm, welcome-back hug,
Linda

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