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Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2005-06-02 03:01 AM

communicating
without words
in hot mist
and moonlight -
I'll write
my poems
across
your shoulder
down
your spine
inside
your sighs.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2005-06-02 06:21 AM

hmmmmmmm
hope you never
run out of rhyme
or time

enjoyed this ms

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-06-02 08:54 AM

this is nice
liked it a lot

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2005-06-02 09:07 AM

Sometimes, words are a needless encumbrance to the creation of poetry.....and the best have no words at all.

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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-06-02 03:02 PM

Beki~

*sigh*
*sigh*
*sigh*

I simply adore this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-06-02 03:12 PM

this was delovely

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2005-06-02 03:19 PM

Sensual, and soft, loved it.

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

7 posted 2005-06-03 12:56 PM

thanks everyone it may be short but it says a lot

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2005-06-04 12:56 PM

You can do that? James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2005-06-04 12:14 PM

Captivating!

Love, Margherita

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

10 posted 2005-06-05 04:34 PM

Ay, chicita. Te continuas tocarme con sus palabras. Escrita hermosa. Mucho gusto!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Paper Tiger
Member

since 2003-09-28

Posts 77

11 posted 2005-06-05 06:08 PM

Surprisingly enough, this poem works. Nice job.

Life is wasted on the living.

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

12 posted 2005-06-05 11:25 PM

and a lovely poem that would be

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

13 posted 2005-06-05 11:39 PM

this speaks to the heart through the ears ...

It made me want to break out my sigh-master

never try to teach a pig to sing
it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

14 posted 2005-06-05 11:47 PM

quote:
inside
your sighs

I thought this was hot!

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

15 posted 2005-06-06 04:39 AM

por yv muchos gracias por tus palabras generosas.

for everyone else, many thanks. It was meant to be all the things you each saw in it, I am so glad it succeeds

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

16 posted 2005-06-06 10:46 AM

That kind of poetry
brings sensuality
to new levels..

Nicely done, Beki.

CG

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