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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2005-06-01 05:38 PM

~*~

Intoxicated
by the scent of jasmine that clung to the veranda
mixing our breath
in the lamplight that gave me away.

Enhancing the glow
and anticipation
that fell on closed eyelids
slowing the rhythm of silence moving.

And in the splendor of it all
was a sense of grandeur and intimate ensembles
that dazzles the moment and makes it sparkle.
To reach for the stars and be lifted by a lover's embrace.

Cradled in the new moons crescent,
and yes, I could have danced all night.
For in your kiss
there was enough passion to light up a city.

If you only knew
how I relished the view
and every breath that we breathed
that took us over the top.

~*~

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2005-06-01 05:40 PM

nicely done ma'am..as usual.. and this speaks of a happiness ...I hope you enjoy forever

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2005-06-01 05:41 PM

oh this is soooooo pretty!

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2005-06-01 05:43 PM

Oh yeah. I can feel this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2005-06-01 05:46 PM

how beautiful Lori to see you smile.....lovely gal....I hope the city light stay in a glow....

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

5 posted 2005-06-01 05:46 PM

wow ... I have seen those city lights ...
           from LA to NYC !!!

             none shine as bright as you here!!

                           what a way to shine!!!

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2005-06-01 05:57 PM

Written with such passion! Yep! Nice visions! Enjoyed this very much!! Those city lights seem very attractive...

miscee

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2005-06-01 06:07 PM

Lori

I'm happy for the happiness that Ron saw, for I see it too in you, in this poem.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2005-06-01 06:34 PM

Gee thanks everybody. I was just trying to break out of my blue mode.

Truth is, my memories linger long, and that's a good thing, I think.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2005-06-01 07:17 PM

If you only knew
how I relished the view
and every breath that we breathed
that took us over the top.

This is beautiful Lori.
Yanno? Memories can be such very beautiful things when we embrace them. You have written yours wonderfully hon. Hugs

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

10 posted 2005-06-01 10:57 PM

Nobody says it like you, Bluesgal -- nobody!

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2005-06-01 11:27 PM

very grand
as your entrance in shimmery blonde lights
is always

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2005-06-02 12:44 PM

Nice...James

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

13 posted 2005-06-02 01:45 AM

swirling, dizzying, and captivating...

lucky you.

well done.

we are what we seek

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

14 posted 2005-06-02 09:17 AM

beautiful writing

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

15 posted 2005-06-02 10:56 AM

Sounds like a trip to the city worth taking!

good to read you Blues!

~tier

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

16 posted 2005-06-02 06:25 PM

About time I changed my tune, so while I was at it
I figured I'd change into something comfortable.

Thank you all for your nice replies.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

17 posted 2005-06-02 10:51 PM

Yup, can't take the passion out of your lovely heart and delightful soul. How I long for you to find it again.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

18 posted 2005-06-03 10:56 AM

Larry~ Thank you for all the kindness you bestow upon me.
It means so very much!! Hugs~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

19 posted 2005-06-06 04:02 PM

For in your kiss
there was enough passion to light up a city.

Oh, yes... *S* A kiss like this is never forgotten... no matter what. *S* This is beautiful work, Bluesy One...

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