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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-05-31 06:33 AM



Sitting in evening sun,
you enter my thoughts,
warmth is now doubled,

Birds are joyously singing,
as the gentle wind moves,
dances, between the leaves,

Peacefulness, quietness,
my active mind, now all yours,
time I have, to think of you,

As I look to the sky,
A million thoughts fly,
watching huge clouds pass by,

How easily they drift,
flying one place to another,
only if I could ride one?

Then, all my questions,
could find their answers,
floating into your arms,

The cloud stops,
destination arrived,
upon your rooftop,

The waited moment is here,
inside your loving arms,
peace and happiness flows,

Now my thoughts will be,
with you, shared,
no longer thinking alone,

Our thoughts, our days,
together, looking,
up to the white clouds,

Floating into,
the imagination of,
our lifelong dreams together,
combined into one heart-shaped cloud...




"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

© Copyright 2005 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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1 posted 2005-05-31 06:54 AM


Every cloud that passes above me i shall look to..what else do angels arrive on?...

A poem of beauty amd softness..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-05-31 07:00 AM


hmmm...? maybe wings....of a jumbo jet...LOL!
or maybe down...a "Stairway from Heaven"?

"Shes Got a Ticket to Ride"....

~Thank you...

~ARH(SA)

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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3 posted 2005-05-31 07:39 AM


loved the entire poem, gave me such a peace
but this I liked especially

Sitting in evening sun,
you enter my thoughts,
warmth is now doubled,

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2005-05-31 07:48 AM


Thanks Lee,
Those were my favorite lines as well..

~ARh


"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
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Alberta, Canada
5 posted 2005-05-31 03:22 PM



May the cloud take you to the land of your heart’s true dream, ARH....

CastleGuard

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