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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2005-05-30 03:18 PM



Those two men in the boat
Must think I know
What I am doing

Perhaps it’s the pipe
A certain nonchalance
That has them fooled

Casting the lure
As my father would
If he were here


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-06-01 10:19 AM



Says a lot
about appearances...

and how [gene] pools
echo.

Enjoyed this John.  Thank you.

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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2 posted 2005-06-01 12:15 PM


I love this one.  Assurance is all it takes, and I hope the fish are fooled.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
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3 posted 2007-04-30 03:08 PM


memory. father will live in your heart forever.

one sat there missing father, other to in the boat yonder thingign he was fishing, so  the wrong echo if there was one.

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