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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-05-29 01:18 PM



morning breeze kisses
whisper their sweet caresses
‘cross bare legs dangling
along the edge of the deck

the early morning sun,
being courted by a blue, blue sky,
beams down her warm blush pleasure
to envelop my baby girl and I

the robins and larks, how they dance
hopping about the green, green grass
the bumble bees, they bumble
as they tumble through the air

my baby girl chatters with the happies
just hangin’ with her mommy here
and I think I taste a slice of Heaven
with the magic cast by this spell

for the sweet, sweet of summer has found us
with her simplicity and savory hues
weaving about us her capture of wonder
in this lazy daisy day spill

s.a.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2005-05-29 02:03 PM


A beautiful sharing dear Susan of your sweet Summer Sunday morning.

Reading was like being there and seeing the picture and taking part in it.

Indeed these are moments to be immortalized.

Love and Joy.
Margherita

Enchantress
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2 posted 2005-05-29 02:14 PM


Beautiful write Susan..
Your imagery took me there as I watched you and your daughter.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-05-29 02:14 PM



A serenely sweet summer day to be savored ~ and remembered
~ and treasured...

Sparkles, you shine with this one. I do believe your baby is fortunate to have a mother such as you!

Love & Summer Light,
Linda


passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-05-29 05:34 PM


there is no greater thing than mother and daughter time
Susan
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5 posted 2005-05-29 08:55 PM


thank you, dear ladies - for your warm and for sharing my moment of sunshine -

may sunshine bless you all and your loved ones too -

hugs -     Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2005-05-31 01:18 PM


This is such a touching write, Susan~
You captured the magic and simplicity, so beautifully~

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7 posted 2005-05-31 01:23 PM


You captured a moment in time that can never be re-created, and you did it with love, grace, such sweetness and, simplicity.  Loved this poem Susan, and printed it for my "Keeper Book."  A lovely thing to read this morning.

Carpe'Diem - but I see you do.

Susan
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walking the surreal
8 posted 2005-05-31 03:07 PM


Bluesy- thank you my friend

Mysteria - you bless me, I am so pleased you wished to add this to your colleciton

Hugs to you both - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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