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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-05-27 06:57 AM



it is that place again
there down the back side
of your neck
before the curves begin

it is there I think about now
and my mouth waters
wondering just how long
it would take you

to begin melting
into my favorite flavors
and if you would try
to pull away from me

so you could keep control
of your lovely composure
and keep your lady
a lady just a bit longer before

a kiss turned her into a woman


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dark

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MGROVES
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1 posted 2005-05-27 07:04 AM


it wouldnt be easy  pulling away
from you

  nice

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-05-27 07:12 AM


Your lady
is probably puddled
by now...



Good morning, DS...

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
3 posted 2005-05-27 08:32 AM


....mmmm a melt in your mouth poem....

lol...

BTW,

Happy Birthday, my friend~

love&light,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

SEA
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4 posted 2005-05-27 09:18 AM


happy Birthday? It's your birthday???? what?!  I had no idea...

loved the poem..and if it really is your birthday, I'm sorry I didn't know and hope you have a happy one!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2005-05-27 10:23 AM


Lovely D -

Happy Birthday Weekend - and warm wishes-

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

MGROVES
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6 posted 2005-05-27 11:44 PM



  

       

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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