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The Rainbows End
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The Rainbows End |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Rainbows end One day I found the rainbows end Before it fade in wind and wend I rode the spirit of my mind And laid my crop on it’s behind I would not let illusions force Drive me off my wish and course I kept the blinders on my eyes And paid no heed to swish and sighs It was a race a maddening pace To reach the end and gain first place To charge into the treasures hall To shut the doors and have it all But when I plunged into the cist I found the dew of morning’s mist Where gold lay heavy in the sky And stars, t’would make a diamond sigh It’s there I learned a moment true A treasures find is up to you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so true thanks for the lovely read this bright morning |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh hugs, this was beautiful, especially loved laying the crop on it's behind... Good one...enjoyed this much and yes, like PS stated, so so true... Hugs and Good Morning |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
One day I found the rainbows end Before it fade in wind and wend I rode the spirit of my mind And laid my crop on it’s behind ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ and that will be my WAY cool verse of the day... that last line... you are the bomb.  I would not let illusions force Drive me off my wish and course I kept the blinders on my eyes And paid no heed to swish and sighs ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ leave the sighing to the moths LOL But when I plunged into the cist I found the dew of morning’s mist Where gold lay heavy in the sky And stars, t’would make a diamond sigh and there is the verse that launched a million sighs. *S* how very lovely are your couplets of cadence... It’s there I learned a moment true A treasures find is up to you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well then I will tell you true ... I found rainbow rhyme treasure in you.  *ww*    I am sure of my reasons, embracing the seasons, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Sigh Sage! Here I go again! Saving another one of your illustrious writes!  You should be charging me for I have amassed bookloads of your poems! ~ Which I would have gladly paid for in a bookstore! Your continued creativity and wisdom, absolutely amazes and astounds this reader! ~ and FAN! EA |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Brava! This is perfect m'friend. Good morning Sey, how are you this fine day!  I really want to care, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing I'm glad it is a bright morning. Hugs LeeJ Hugs and good mornig sweety. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Ya know when I met you I was on a rainbows path. WW Earth Angel Well I can only say it's always nice having an Angel on your side. Gentle I am fine thank you and the best of the day to you. Hugs |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
That truth is so valuable to keep in mind, but so often we lose it. Thank you for the reminder. Ben “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh how true your words ring this morn Sy! Love this pearls of wisdom keeper. ~Morning hugs,...Smiles, & Tea, Nancy~ Life is one great big canvas; |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
El_Campeador You welcome and thank you. vandana Thank you dear. Nancy, Thank you sweety. |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Sy, Thanks for an uplifting piece adagio |
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youcan'tseeme Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 88 |
'It’s there I learned a moment true A treasures find is up to you ' oh so true thank you for reigniting this in our hearts beautiful write |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Seymour I always love to read your words of wisdom and this was simply wonderful. I hope all is well with you. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Well done, Sy. I hope you didn't make the same mistake I did. I ended up in a room of vengeful kitties. Not good. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
adagio Thank you for the read and reply. youcan'tseeme Thank you so much Suetang Enjoyed your reply thank you sweet. LngJhnAg So the kitties are ganging up on you. LOL |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
It certainly is, isn't it? Hello dear friend...I have been remiss in my duties of greeting you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, You are a good friend. Thank you for the stop bye. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Well, I could not miss your wondrous rainbow ride, dear Seymour! Awesome! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Thank you and love you too. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes... it is. *S* And you write truth so beautifully, my friend... Excellent! *S* |
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