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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2005-05-25 02:24 PM


touched.
variation deviating from
prime… here in the now of my only phase of peaceful vertigo.  
the sound of splashed wine
in the deepest throat
joyfully amused by the scream
of the world.

beautiful.  

snow
magnifying the scream  
for the hungry minds of the monotony…

i listen    


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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2005-05-25 03:08 PM


Love it... thanks.
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with you
2 posted 2005-05-25 03:12 PM


"touched.
variation deviating from
prime… here in the now of my only phase of peaceful vertigo."

very cool write

passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-05-25 07:06 PM


good to read you again

missed your work

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