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D.Lester Young
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Austin, Tx

0 posted 2005-05-25 05:46 AM


Cabin upon mountain spring air,
Sunrise verse of Colorado shadows.
Fingers massaging landscapes awake,
Mountains climbing upon daylight.

Warmth swaying songbird’s rhythms,
Sounds orchestrating tranquil oscillations.
Meditative clairvoyant levitated mindscape
Staged upon nature’s words of clarity.

Illuminated absorbance transfixed interpolation,
Interleave manipulation of creative luminance.
Crafted manipulations in cognitive abstractions,
Crystallizing so clear upon mountain air.

Radiance upon water reflections, dancing trout,
Stepping stones to reflective sensual pools.
Lazy morning of skinny dipping thoughts,
Carefree buoyancy free basing natural highs.

Afternoon walk, trails of wildlife romance.
Ambiance fragrances consuming Colorado air,
Wandering trails, artistic minded independence,
Overlook wilderness painted masterpieces.

Golden glow arching mystical clearing,
Hidden aperture of natural erotic word play,
Grazing pasture of mountain wild flowers,
Treasured natural wealth of gratification.

Imported flowering, cracking roots to rocks,
Fringes blossoming clinging sunshine rainbows.
Poetic heaven of visual and verbal sculptures,
Center stage rhapsody of musical wild flowers.

Drifting back contented upon sun setting peace,
Dynamic hues slowly descending the arena dark.
While the stars of Colorado shine so bright,
A poet can become overwhelmed with words.

D.Lester
Somewhere in America not on company time 05/24/05 ©
The Terminated Free Spirited Poet Searching Out America’s dreams



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-05-25 07:17 AM


very descriptive, very vivid
love that ending line


Margherita
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2 posted 2005-05-28 11:38 AM


quote:
Radiance upon water reflections, dancing trout,
Stepping stones to reflective sensual pools.




And I am glad you got "overwhelmed with words".

The title induced me to read ... a very very beautiful write.

Love, Margherita

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3 posted 2005-05-28 12:33 PM


"Imported flowering, cracking roots to rocks,
Fringes blossoming clinging sunshine rainbows.
Poetic heaven of visual and verbal sculptures,
Center stage rhapsody of musical wild flowers."


this is so pretty

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