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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2005-05-24 11:54 PM



I showed you a leaf trick once,
with the sky as my parachute,
i rode off with your awe
into the soul of obvlivion,

and o how i dazzled you !!

but my heartwings grew crutches
when i attempted to shed more
than the prettypink of myself

" off kilter !! imposter!!!"
you throw wordstones at me....

" demented and twisted,"
now my ailing arms weep,

so you run
and how can i blame you now,

when loose leaves and broken branches
exchange prints, and drop formalities
in one unchartered romance,
where only a betterman (than you) dare go.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (05-25-2005 08:07 AM).]

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-05-25 08:04 AM


awesome!
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2005-05-25 08:07 AM


inkedgoddess
Got the message enjoyed the read.

Susan
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-05-25 10:04 AM


packs a punch, pow - enjoyed inky-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-05-25 10:23 AM


some people, always have a vision in their minds of the perfect mate...woman or man...and then when the newness wears off, and that person becomes normally with flaw...which I might add, makes up the specialness of each individual...those persons, have set up a vision that no one will ever reach, and they run, run, run, believing in their minds, that they're justified...which also intensifies the blame on the individual who made a mistake...
no one is perfect, there are no angels, knights in shining armor...nothing left but real unadulterated life...so don't feel to badly, if it didn't happen now, it would have eventually...understand?
Love is not pure fantasy, it is real, with real good times, and real not so good times...maturity stays, responsible stays, love stays...and doesn't jump in and out of relationships.

Hugs to you sweet lady

bklynboy
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florida
5 posted 2005-05-25 06:26 PM


Doing it to you again and again. Keep it up!
adagio
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6 posted 2005-05-25 07:23 PM


OUCH!! Those wordstones can really hurt!
Loved this one
adagio

timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
7 posted 2005-05-27 01:42 AM


"where only a betterman (than you) dare go."

Oooh, I like this


iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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8 posted 2005-05-27 05:04 PM


Michele....all I can say is, "WOW!"  You do leaf tricks in print!   ....jo
Dark Angel
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9 posted 2005-05-27 05:14 PM


with the sky as my parachute

you throw wordstones at me....

when loose leaves and broken branches
exchange prints, and drop formalities
in one unchartered romance,
where only a betterman (than you) dare go.


O, i've been waiting for you ...sigh, absolutely wondermous.

Now i can get on with the day.

Great ending!

library

more please

M

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

MGROVES
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10 posted 2005-05-27 11:04 PM


good words here, thanks for sharing

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
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11 posted 2005-05-31 09:47 AM


  outstanding!!  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
12 posted 2005-05-31 01:09 PM


Unchartered romance is a nice touch!

Wonderful write Michele~
Go get em, girlie!

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