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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2005-05-24 04:21 AM

I'm lonely

there's a missing part
a string was snipped of puppetry

I'm lonely

and my knees are art
knocking in this symmetry

as if I were performances

as if I danced too free for string

I'm lonely.

There's a missing part

and gravity

completes my need

of the puce stains of obtuse

dripping from my brushburned knees.

I am lonely.

Lick me bleed.

Watch me pick the scabs and plead

bury them beneath the greed

of ice and things that melt.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-05-24 06:41 AM

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-05-24 07:33 AM

If it were in my power, I'd erase all pain and lonliness from your life, Sweet Serenity.

For now, all I can do is send you my love, compassion, prayers and a bubble of pink, healing Light.

Even in your present state of mind, you write with such eloquence ~ and creativity.

I am wrapping my arms around you,
Linda

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2005-05-24 08:28 AM

There isn't a time I read you that I am not amazed..and grateful.

Now, I have a party coming up...want to come?
It's a BBQ..yum.

love you muchly lady!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2005-05-24 08:31 AM

YES.

I want to COME.

to your party, even...

sheesh.

The sun is up. Way past my bedtime, and lady, I know, I know, I owe you an e mail, long overdue.

and a barbecue sounds fine.

I like burnt weenies m'self.

APPARENTLY.

thanks all for reading....sheesh

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2005-05-24 10:12 AM

there's a missing part
a string was snipped of puppetry

I'm lonely

and my knees are art
knocking in this symmetry

as if I were performances

as if I danced too free for string

I'm lonely.

There's a missing part

and gravity

completes my need

of the puce stains of obtuse

dripping from my brushburned knees.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

yep...like Susan.. I am always amazed and grateful of your talent and poetry...and for the friendship.

I am sure of my reasons, embracing the seasons,
and the sacred simplicity of you at my side.

Vienna Teng

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2005-05-24 10:21 AM

...hmmm...I always liked the color "puce" or maybe I like the sound of the word...can't remember.

*HUG*

You do know that the thought of you and Susan together at a party, with the shared intent of grilling weenies, could be a dark and frightening thought.

*smile*

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

7 posted 2005-05-24 11:48 AM

poweful, just absolutely stunning, but then....what do you write that isn't?
big hugs lady
in church, they say that if you 'say' life is hard, then it will be....but 'saying' that it isn't doesn't seem to make it any easier....maybe that's what they mean about the rock and the hard place thingy...cause that's where I have been all my life...and rocks don't make good pillows... sigh

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2005-05-24 04:09 PM

M'lady, you ROCK!......ma world

So, when do we peel the crawfish?

,xx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2005-05-24 09:42 PM

there is much soul in all you gift us with....

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

10 posted 2005-05-24 11:25 PM

you are a poet. there's not one wasted word or syllable.

even the apostrophe's and they're late drop, speak

very well done.

never try to teach a pig to sing
it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2005-05-25 08:27 AM

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

12 posted 2005-05-25 06:58 PM

Believe it or not I see some brightness at the end of the tunnel for you.
The darkness shall pass.
I know I owe you another visit but Leah says call first, and your phone has been busy all day and yesterday.
oh well, Cinnomon Altoids tou you.
all my best
adagio

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

13 posted 2005-05-25 10:14 PM

thanks

to all (with cinnamon altoid breath, yet another addiction revealed...)

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

14 posted 2005-06-02 12:57 PM

Yep, yep, yep. Understood. I think we all, deep down, have a missing piece, too, and how well you express this! hugs you..........jo

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

15 posted 2005-06-03 02:36 AM

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