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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-05-23 07:44 AM


yes I noticed your eyes
and the smile you offered
when he went to the window
and left you single again
for those long moments

you dropped your credit card
name side up accidental
and waited for my gentleman
to read it before returning
with a touch of skin greeting

and you said my eyes
were not nice naughty
for looking at your gifts
nearly unwrapped in public
but the ocean made you do it

and did I come here often
and would I take you
for a ride somewhere fast
but slowly enough
for the memories to last

til he found another window

_______________
dark

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2005-05-23 07:49 AM


youre a dream within a dream
windowless you fly over the sky

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2005-05-23 07:53 AM


ms inky, thanks hon..you are a pleasure

SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
3 posted 2005-05-23 08:42 AM


"but the ocean made you do it"

this is actually a very solid excuse

good morning D

Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2005-05-23 08:51 AM


I have to shine with SEA...
one of the best excuses
ever devised...


Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2005-05-23 10:20 AM


Smiling here D - good morning

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

jellybeans
Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298

6 posted 2005-05-23 10:23 AM


not what I expected, but instead more than what I expected
smiling here as well....great imagery

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
7 posted 2005-05-23 10:40 AM


sea, thanks lady friend,

____________-
sunshine you are a blessing with your warm

____________

suzzin, thanks lady

___________
ms jellybean, glad you stopped by, thank you

babygirlwlove
Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
8 posted 2005-05-23 11:24 AM


oh, love the images you leave us with~

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
9 posted 2005-05-24 08:52 AM


thanks bbgirl
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