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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2005-05-21 11:26 PM


and so autumn
becomes the winter

and i carry
with me the starry void
the wet fog
of her infinite
eyes

beautiful muse
oh burning star

my far-away femmina


give to me
your sorrow

cast me your
sad nets
and the moonlight
that pecks
the constellations
in your sea-blue
eyes

because
on days like this one?

my heart howls with the wind.

:note: femmina = female



"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

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coyote
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1 posted 2005-05-21 11:39 PM


Ahhh, I love this Maree.

Excellent work.

Billy 8)

"If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it."
Albert Einstein

Martie
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2 posted 2005-05-21 11:48 PM


Maree

"cast me your
sad nets
and the moonlight
that pecks
the constellations
in your sea-blue
eyes"

There is much love in these words.  


Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2005-05-22 12:06 PM


talk about a warm hug for a sister
you are so sweet
she will love this

SEA
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with you
4 posted 2005-05-22 12:57 PM


"and so autumn
becomes the winter

and i carry
with me the starry void
the wet fog
of her infinite
eyes"

loving this!

Margherita
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5 posted 2005-05-22 05:29 AM


Ah, Maree, tu sei una femmina bella! Dentro e fuori.

I have noticed you often use Italian words.
I love your MUSIC.

Love,
Margherita

Margherita
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6 posted 2005-05-22 05:31 AM


Cielo, for a moment I thought I had replied on the wrong thread! A change of photo!
What I said is still true: tu sei bella!

Ciao!
Margherita

Sunshine
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7 posted 2005-05-22 10:34 AM



What one
might do for
another...

beautiful thoughts here, little one.

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8 posted 2005-05-22 02:15 PM


I love the new photo!  Secondly, you look huggable, and therefore I can see why you can give great hugs too!   You are a good friend to those you keep close to you Maree.  Beautiful work.
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9 posted 2005-05-22 05:39 PM


yet another pearl...


passing shadows
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10 posted 2005-05-22 05:47 PM


awesome
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11 posted 2005-05-23 06:10 AM


the puzzles on the tongues of gods
tease the lips with forbidden glimpses
and we will sink beyond the stars
to explore these riddles kisses

wranx
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12 posted 2005-05-23 11:57 AM


Amazing, aren't they?

These bold riddles called women

Yep, ya just gotta love 'em

Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2005-05-23 01:06 PM


this belongs in m' treasure chest lady...

Susan
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14 posted 2005-05-23 03:09 PM


enjoyed the feeling this left me with -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
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15 posted 2005-05-24 10:32 AM


hey where is the hat?

(grin)

enjoyed this maree
as usual

Janet Marie
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16 posted 2005-05-24 10:44 AM


Im so glad this gem of pen came back up...awesome imagery
tis truly lovely Maree..thats some muse you got.

I am sure of my reasons, embracing the seasons,
and the sacred simplicity of you at my side.

Vienna Teng

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