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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2005-05-21 07:33 AM



harbor moon
you are the gypsy's candle
at her wagon window
when the lonely whisper
there is warm

I touch the sides of you
like a velvet ocean
and taste your salty lantern
on my fingers
like a kiss sometimes

blown from a limb
onto the tin roof soul
and you shake me awake then
with your tide tease ties
my hands know the wound of you

but we are helpless lovers
in our statued skins
waiting for the dawn
to bring us chisels
and be the hammer

that makes us into blended dust

_________

dark

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2005-05-21 09:57 AM


goodness....this is beautiful!
Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2005-05-21 10:58 AM


breathtaking and heart rending - beautiful d

S

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babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
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3 posted 2005-05-21 11:02 AM


like a kiss sometimes

blown from a limb
onto the tin roof soul
and you shake me awake then
with your tide tease ties
my hands know the wound of you

classic dark.

a pleasure, pleasure ...to feel

**babygirL



**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2005-05-21 05:29 PM


Such touching intimacy with this harbor moon!

Beautiful!

Love, Margherita

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
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In Your Poetic Mind
5 posted 2005-05-21 06:08 PM


that makes us into blended dust.....


indeed!

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2005-05-25 09:43 AM


like a kiss sometimes

blown from a limb
onto the tin roof soul
and you shake me awake

~*~

tides are wonderful...
but watch out
for those that rip...


LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-05-25 09:52 AM


so happy I had the opportunity to read
this was a wealth of luxury and love
yes, harbor moon is aptly chosen...

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2005-05-25 10:31 AM


good write
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
9 posted 2005-05-25 11:06 AM


Beneath the harbor moon, the waters run very deep...

Love & Moon Light,
EA

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