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Rick
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0 posted 2005-05-21 05:57 AM



Oh spirit of the Holy one
I seek you, though in vain
My thoughts, they seem to weigh a ton
From dawn until the day is done
Each moment seems the same
The Devil plays his game
Possessed I am, my mind and soul
By dread that wont refrain
Much does see the clock of toll
Aimlessly I onward stroll
The pain, I can not tame

Oh spirit of the Holy Master
Where I pray it’s cold
My mind with thoughts is running faster
Days have turned into disaster
Quickly I grow old
Weakened body, no desire
Vulnerable, is my attire
How the days unfold
Strength I’m needing to admire
As I drift down to the fire
Sleep no more, I tire, tire
My heart, its fate is told

Oh spirit of the Holy Lord
Fulfillment arms have closed
Not sustained by love or cord
But by devil untoward
His sin of black imposed
I lay my knees down to the ground
My hands they join for prayer
I hear for you, but not a sound
Your presence I feel all around
I know your everywhere
And always will be there
Wherever I am bound

© Copyright 2005 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-05-21 06:00 AM


you know me Rick...I'm not one for religious poetry, but this, I loved!

a beautiful inspiring write!

Rick
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2 posted 2005-05-21 06:10 AM


Dear Dixie, me either, I wrote this years ago, backing up all my docs and looking back at some found this, thought others might enjoy, great to see you here again my friend, hope you are well.

Sincerely
Rick

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2005-05-21 09:18 AM


Rick
It is only a phase it's the crossing over that is hard. Enjoyed

Rick
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4 posted 2005-05-21 09:24 AM


Seymour, thank you for your reply, always nice to see you here, often I write like this, must be filling a void that constantly questions life and fate, now and tomorrow.

Sincerely
Rick

Copperbell
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5 posted 2005-05-21 05:58 PM


Enjoyed your reflections - nice to see you again Rick
Rick
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6 posted 2005-05-21 07:47 PM


Copperbell, nice to see you as well, nice reflecting back at times on certain things, thank you for your reply, again much appreciated.

Sincerely
Rick

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