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~K~
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0 posted 2005-05-21 01:36 AM



so it is
perhaps
as it
should be

my thoughts
flung in
abstract
adhere to nothing

but the now
of my soul
screams
her name aloud

and I would not be
without a witness
as these tender moments
bloom into a full obsession

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Dark Angel
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1 posted 2005-05-21 02:15 AM


I do so enjoy your words

m

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Michael Hutchence (INXS)

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displaced
2 posted 2005-05-21 05:56 AM


wonderful write
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with you
3 posted 2005-05-21 09:59 AM


wow! this is really fantastic
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state of mind
4 posted 2005-05-21 10:05 AM



bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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5 posted 2005-05-24 04:05 AM


Im sure she always watches, and never misses a moment of your voice even when it screams for her to leave...

we all are drawn in by one soul or another

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2005-05-24 08:34 AM


"my thoughts
flung in
abstract
adhere to nothing"

Very cool!  love those lines!


"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

LeeJ
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7 posted 2005-05-26 08:57 AM


enjoyed the entire poem...well done
adagio
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Marrero, La.
8 posted 2005-05-26 04:08 PM


Very well done,
enjoyed

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
9 posted 2005-05-26 04:14 PM


"my thoughts
flung in
abstract
adhere to nothing"

~ Uniquely creative and expressive lines!

Love & Light,
EA

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2005-05-26 04:19 PM


Very well done and much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

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11 posted 2005-05-26 11:12 PM


never cease to impress
MGROVES
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california
12 posted 2005-05-28 06:44 AM


a beauty~
enjoyed, thanks for sharing

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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