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latearrival
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0 posted 2005-05-20 04:12 PM



                If my name were Aphrodite
                I'd send an aphrodisiac
                of sweet ambrosia.

                A song as tender as the
                Humming birds wing
                would sing out to you.
                
                A kiss as soft as the feathers
                flighting touch would sit
                upon your lips.
    
                And you would know love
                as only the gods command.
      
      marty

© Copyright 2005 martyjo - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2005-05-20 05:37 PM


wooooooo
this is awesome!
how beautifully you describe...

latearrival
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2 posted 2005-05-20 05:50 PM


Thank you Sea, an old broad with great memories. LOL martyjo
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-05-20 08:04 PM


Very nice...James
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4 posted 2005-05-20 09:56 PM


Wow..your name doesn't need to be Aphrodite with words like that....and, you know, I believe every word of it.
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5 posted 2005-05-20 10:03 PM


Marty...

you've written a special poem...
and it seems to me,
it would be one of another time
for the first love.

It is...

a keeper

latearrival
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6 posted 2005-05-20 10:42 PM


James, Thank you very much.

Mike, My secret LOL

Sunshine, ditto above. LOL
I was too young at sixteen to have express those thoughts. Much too naive then. Maybe I am saying now what I did not know how to then. martyjo

latearrival
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7 posted 2005-05-20 10:43 PM


James, Thank you very much.

Mike, My secret LOL

Sunshine, ditto above. LOL
I was too young at sixteen to have expressed those thoughts. Much too naive then. Maybe I am saying now what I did not know how to then. martyjo

[This message has been edited by latearrival (05-21-2005 12:42 PM).]

latearrival
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8 posted 2005-05-20 10:57 PM


Please excuse the double entry. Having a problem deleting it. marty
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9 posted 2005-05-22 05:50 PM


Late- This poem is in tiself an aphrpdesiac

adagio (please pardon spelling)

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10 posted 2005-05-22 06:56 PM


marty, this is just beautiful
latearrival
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11 posted 2005-05-23 02:35 AM


Thank you Dixie, love marty
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