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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-05-20 04:05 PM



of tall tree woman
I will miss your beadwork
and will think of you sometimes
when at the river
watching the sky songs speak

and when on the highways
with my shirt moving on my back
pretending to be your woman places
knowing me lover friendly
from behind my wanting

I move forward
to the beyond stones for now
but eternal as the wind
I will be a mountain there
above your searching shadows

hurry your springtime tall tree woman

_____
dark

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-05-20 04:15 PM



Let the evergreens
guide you
until spring returns...

beautiful songs, DS

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2005-05-20 04:36 PM


surely she will return
when such please honor her
eternal beauty
(hey i wasnt dirty here......lol
  

Martie
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3 posted 2005-05-20 04:47 PM


DS

"but eternal as the wind
I will be a mountain there
above your searching shadows"

How very beautiful!  

babygirlwlove
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4 posted 2005-05-20 05:09 PM


dark~

that's one awesome tribute...my friend...feeling the imagery...

niiice...
**babygirL**

Dark Angel
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5 posted 2005-05-20 05:11 PM


Beautiful writing Mr D

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

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with you
6 posted 2005-05-21 01:07 AM


"and will think of you sometimes
when at the river
watching the sky songs speak"

very much enjoyed this

Susan
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7 posted 2005-05-21 11:12 AM


your words stir heart leaves as a gentle love touch breeze - beautiful here d-

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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8 posted 2005-05-21 02:01 PM


Just beautiful imagery here.

~* C'est la vie *~

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2005-05-24 11:25 AM


of tall tree woman
I will miss your beadwork
and will think of you sometimes
when at the river
watching the sky songs speak

and when on the highways
with my shirt moving on my back
pretending to be your woman places
knowing me lover friendly
from behind my wanting

I move forward
to the beyond stones for now
but eternal as the wind
I will be a mountain there
above your searching shadows

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

you KNOW I am loving this one...
read it the other day but didnt have time to do replies...I had to come back and get this for me mothy library...
I do so love your wind whispers.

I am sure of my reasons, embracing the seasons,
and the sacred simplicity of you at my side.

Vienna Teng

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10 posted 2005-05-24 11:35 AM


Beautiful writing and whispering D~  
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2005-05-24 11:46 AM


Dark~

The beauty of your thoughts captivates me~

'and when on the highways
with my shirt moving on my back
pretending to be your woman places
knowing me lover friendly
from behind my wanting'


'hurry your springtime tall tree woman'


So warmly rich with the awareness of what was ... hoping there will be more~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2005-05-24 11:50 AM


pipfellows
you all make me smile with the warm
you bring in your penspeak hands

thank you all

D

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