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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-05-19 12:04 PM




Amber reflections
of sunsets glow
steadily sinking  
    lower
over the horizon

     where your dreams lie

I see mirrored images
   through your eyes
of hope floating
upon waves of courage
that come    crashing down

   resulting the same
   strength is gained

         and the dreams
            of soul
       remain

holding closely,
sights unseen
  mystical moments
     in twilights gleam

whispers of love
on gentle breeze
the unknown touch
     a silent tease

simplistic innocence

grasping keys
of mysteries

'tis a magical life
when the world is seen

through your eyes...


{thank you...through your eyes     my pen sees....}


I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2005-05-19 12:17 PM


A pure delight to read, dear Donna!

Love's eyes focus on beauty only.

Just perfect.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

adagio
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since 2005-03-19
Posts 449
Marrero, La.
2 posted 2005-05-19 12:19 PM


What lovley images this brings to my mind

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-05-19 12:42 PM


BEAUTIFUL DONNA!!!

~Sending warm hugs your way lovely lady~

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-05-19 12:49 PM


Thank you all very much.  When we see the world through another poets eyes, we see so much more than what we see through our own sometimes.  Poets are inspiring people yanno??     
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2005-05-19 03:28 PM


ya said it so well -

Hugs - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2005-05-19 03:36 PM


quote:
When we see the world through another poets eyes, we see so much more than what we see through our own sometimes.


'Atta girl...

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
7 posted 2005-05-19 03:41 PM


YEP!
I agree.  Great write.

JL


Dark Angel
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8 posted 2005-05-19 05:16 PM


You penned this beautifully Bella. Thank you for allowing us to see through your eyes.



Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2005-05-20 09:01 AM


Thanking each of you on this Friday morning
and Maree, thank you for the inspiration of visions....
Hugs ya'll.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

10 posted 2005-05-20 04:32 PM


you are a very special lady, poet and friend Donna.. you DO know that right?

I'm sure i speak for many.... Bella Donna..beautiful lady.

I thank you.

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2005-05-20 08:10 PM


Enjoyed...James
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In Your Poetic Mind
12 posted 2005-05-21 06:13 PM


lovely this lovely you!

luv ya

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

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