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Open Poetry #35

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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-05-18 06:57 AM

sometimes when you say it
out loud with your thoughts
the unabridged whisper
with no rules vulgar

I think you are me then
wearing your skin
over my bones and mind
running bare foot dare

down the street of dreams
with the lights on
and not caring about them
that watch from narrow windows

I hear your leather
and feel the stripes
of unforgiving lashes
just in the right places

to bring the healing
and then sometimes
you say it again
out loud with your thoughts

I think you are me then
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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-05-18 07:02 AM

it is remarkable, when we are blessed with meeting souls who are of such great likeness of ourselves...kinda like coming home...so peaceful and very welcomed...in this, my poet friend, you are truly blessed...as your words also, serve many blessings

Love to you and yours my friend...and always, thank you for sharing.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-05-18 08:12 AM

running bare foot dare

down the street of dreams
with the lights on
and not caring about them
that watch from narrow windows

~*~

Now, that wouldn't be a double dog dare,
would it?