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ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2005-05-18 12:41 PM


from under your eyes
     I feel a loss
     the loss of sighs
     of many love's toss
     as my heart dies


from under your eyes
     I see what one needs
     the lapse of lies
     where my heart bleeds


from under your eyes

     let me wipe the seeds

"In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living."
  

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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2005-05-18 01:19 AM


from under your eyes
     I see what one needs
     the lapse of lies
     where my heart bleeds


from under your eyes

     let me wipe the seeds


s i g h

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-05-18 01:24 AM


you know I love this
passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-05-18 01:24 AM


thanks for bringing me back
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just out of reach
4 posted 2005-05-18 09:57 AM


This is awesome Craig. Keepin' it!
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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5 posted 2005-05-18 01:30 PM


I love your way with words

Tara

"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness."    -Friedrich Nietzsche

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6 posted 2005-05-18 01:59 PM


Excellent write Craig...very much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

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