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James_A_Fraser
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Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2005-05-17 05:53 PM



Until The Spring

sleeping within
waiting
unknown and
unsuspected
my flower
hidden in the
bulb of me
wintering
waiting
awaiting

until

warm
rays of
you

© Copyright 2005 James A. Fraser - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-05-17 07:54 PM


Jamie...How perfectly lovely!!  
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-05-17 07:58 PM


"awaiting

until

warm
rays of
you"

Beautiful Jamie!!!
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

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3 posted 2005-05-17 08:01 PM


I love the imagery in this poem! This is Good!
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4 posted 2005-05-18 02:54 PM



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5 posted 2005-05-18 04:34 PM


Oh... this is so lovely. *S* Sometimes it seems we'll remain forever dormant and waiting... then the right ray of warmth comes along... yes. *S* Beautiful work!!
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2005-05-18 06:29 PM


very beautiful~~ just the way my thoughts are today
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Eternity
7 posted 2005-05-18 06:34 PM


A little gem!

Love, Margherita

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8 posted 2005-05-20 03:39 PM



Ever growing...
ever nurtured...

beautiful.

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In Your Poetic Mind
9 posted 2005-05-21 06:16 PM


s i g h ...

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

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10 posted 2005-05-21 11:16 PM


much enjoyed            
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