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With Nets Full
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With Nets Full |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Within the flowing, Fishermen rowing Homeward they're bound before nightingale's call, A chill in the breeze Shivers apple trees And a snowstorm of white blooms swirling falls, The teapot boiling Sips at end toiling As the night takes fully the worker's sky, Beneath their blanket, All things they forget, Till reminded by a wee baby's cry. Gloom |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
my oh my, this was certainly a precious reading...welcome home, good to see you in there writing...and what a beauty to boot! Hugs and many many thanks for sharing! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed~ My spirit will rise |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I appreciate the diversity of your settings-it always heightens my awareness. Also, I liked the form you chose. It offers such a gentle rhythm. Thanks. miscellanea |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
nets full, indeed... really enjoyed this K |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Beneath their blanket, All things they forget, Till reminded by a wee baby's cry." I remember...  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write Gloom |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Very well done, loved it adagio |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
As the night takes fully the worker's sky, my favorite time~~ MM |
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