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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-05-17 11:04 AM


see!
the sun shines!
no more clouded gray
but bursts of starshine glory
caught upon golden touch rays—

and

Oh!
my heart,
how it sings!
such a spiritual lift
in this bright light splendor
in this heavenly gift
that the blue skies render

Mother Nature pours out her pleasure
in the warbling of happy note songs
the rustle of tree tops whispering
and the rush of life moving along

and I sit
here in simplicity’s bliss
watching her inhale
and breathe out
the essence of self

s.a.t.



If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-05-17 11:05 AM


Lovely morning song to start the day Susan, beautiful write.
Susan
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2 posted 2005-05-17 11:07 AM


thanks Donna - the sun - it is a wonderful elixer of feel good

Hugs - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-05-17 11:09 AM


Sparkles, you just added some more light to this beautiful spring day up here in Ontario!

Your spirit sang an exceptionally sweet song of spring, Sweet Susan!


Linda

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
4 posted 2005-05-17 11:10 AM


you would go nuts here
so much sun
so little time

enjoyed it sparkie

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2005-05-17 11:14 AM






Thanks for making
my day!!!

Susan
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2005-05-17 11:40 AM


Oh! My day just gets brighter with seeing all your lovely replies - thank you

And D- yes, I know I would love it there

Hugs to you all -

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

latearrival
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Florida
7 posted 2005-05-17 12:45 PM


Who could resist a nice sunshiny day? Thanks  for this, marty
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2005-05-17 01:46 PM


And the sun shines down on my town as well.
Beautiful write for a lovely spring day Susan.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

Susan
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walking the surreal
9 posted 2005-05-17 02:09 PM


Marty - thank you for your warm

Nancy - a blessing, yes?  Such a delight -

Hugs to you both - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2005-05-18 09:36 PM


lovely
ice
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11 posted 2005-05-18 09:47 PM


A poem of truth and beauty......

enjoyed
---------ice/ford
   ><>

inkedgoddess
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Ohio
12 posted 2005-05-18 11:32 PM


liked skipping along through this one suzz
Susan
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walking the surreal
13 posted 2005-05-18 11:49 PM


thank you my friends - you smile me -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
14 posted 2005-05-19 04:58 PM



“Oh!
my heart,
how it sings!
such a spiritual lift
in this bright light splendor
in this heavenly gift
that the blue skies render”

Lift your voice and sing a song unto the Lord, was the first thought that crossed my mind as I read this wonderful poem.  Very inspirational, and heart warming.

JL


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