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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-05-17 07:32 AM



early will you watch my hands
putting motion in the sky
stirring the clouds
with my wand

will you say show me the magic
let it splash on my skin
let me feel the warm
and know the flavors

lean close then tomorrow
to my horizon
let your pale mountains
overflow the black seamed sky

and whisper the permission
that is not needed by a warrior
when the jaunty one
steals the treasure of a dream

and kisses the wrists between the knots
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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-05-17 08:03 AM


yuppers, show me the money babe...and I don't mean in dollars...hehe

and whisper the permission
that is not needed by a warrior
when the jaunty one
steals the treasure of a dream


this was...absolute romantisisum...as is the entire poem...this, is one of my favorites of yours....love your poetic gift

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-05-17 08:36 AM


And it all melts...
in that moment between
twilight

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2005-05-17 08:53 AM


thanks you two...lee j you are a sweetheart with your eyes..

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sunshine, you are a sunshine morning always


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4 posted 2005-05-17 10:31 AM


ahhha yes, and you are magic, aren't you?
yes, I do believe you are

Susan
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5 posted 2005-05-17 10:42 AM


love each and every view here - the last line - it slays me - wonderful dear D-

  S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2005-05-17 11:13 AM


suesea, thanks lady friend, those mountains bring me pleasure with each dawning day.

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susan mrs, thanks babe for the eyes and handcuffs (grin)


Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2005-05-17 11:26 AM


You create magic with words Dark..
yes you do.....  

Cloud 9
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8 posted 2005-05-17 11:27 AM


"early will you watch my hands
putting motion in the sky
stirring the clouds
with my wand"


now what is that you can do with your hands????

You know I love this D.

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2005-05-17 12:26 PM


GS, thanks little lady for the eyes here


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ms nine, so pleased that you enjoyed it, thank you for the read

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10 posted 2005-05-17 03:21 PM


show me the magic
  your a real pleasure

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2005-05-17 04:03 PM


ms groves, thank you lady, you are a blessing with your eye touch
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