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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2005-05-17 04:32 AM



Share your dreams,
meet me there,
your silk soft
hands, smoothing away
my cares, your
soft whisper echoing
through me like
a mistral wind,
down a valey
of amber sunlight.
Leaves fade, from
orange to vermilion,
you wear a
perfect smile of
affecting, moving beauty.
A vision enfolded
within clear light
of early morn,
a nature being,
at one within
it's mystery, magic.
Words are superfluous,
instanlty i understand,
eyes that swim
tell tales superbly.
Your thoughts speak,
like our private
movie, playing in
our respective heads.
Black and white
they are, true
happiness, goodness, love
is there waiting
to be played
out, after our
final complete rehersal.

Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt)

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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2005-05-17 04:37 AM


This is so very lovely, Goldenrose,
your imagery flows, flawlessly!

MGROVES
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california
2 posted 2005-05-17 05:16 AM


beautifully written~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-05-17 09:07 AM


You are so talented! You truly are! ~ and your poetic heart is so full of beauty, love, and the appreciation of nature. I enjoy your writing very much. You share a piece of your soul with every poem that you pen.


EA

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-05-17 11:07 AM


I walked there - saw there - breathed in the beauty -

thank you - susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2005-05-19 08:15 PM


glad I didn't miss this one
adagio
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since 2005-03-19
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Marrero, La.
6 posted 2005-05-20 12:04 PM




Very much enjoyed
adagio

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2005-05-23 01:01 AM


a favorite indeed!
I believe the number to that film is 6132003?

~ARH


"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2008-05-05 07:35 PM


just watched some black and white old films last night, you came across my mind...
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