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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-05-17 12:23 PM



Who Needs A Cold Blooded Man


If I had some real live
warmth in my heart, my
marriage probably wouldn't
have fallen apart...
Who needs a cold
blooded man.


JamesLee
May15
2005

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SEA
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1 posted 2005-05-17 12:26 PM


you have plenty...we read it every single time you post...
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2 posted 2005-05-17 03:29 AM


yes your heart has warmth, as sea said, we feel it every time we read you.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

latearrival
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3 posted 2005-05-17 03:56 AM


No one wants a cold blodded man. But I do not think that man is you. Best martyjo
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-05-18 07:25 PM


Thank you Sea, MGROVES and latearrival for the nice responses...indeed this was written to reveal the man that I used to be...and I agree with the responses....I am much warmer now....learning through experience...James
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5 posted 2005-05-18 11:00 PM


dang, that was good James.

Who needs a cold blooded man?

Well, none of us need them, we just happen to attract them sometimes I think, and YOUR blood... well I echo what my fellow pipsters above have stated... its plenty warm enough, it shows thru your writing.

Tima

adagio
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6 posted 2005-05-20 11:13 AM


Very well done piece of writing.
I will keep this idea in mind if my relationship begins to fail.
adagio

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