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Ericc
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0 posted 2005-05-16 04:06 PM



From fingertips...

One moment.

Reborn to know the constant
sweep of our caress.



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-05-16 04:18 PM


Oh, that electricity!


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just out of reach
2 posted 2005-05-16 04:20 PM


WOW !!!
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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with you
3 posted 2005-05-16 05:45 PM


I really do love how you do this
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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2005-05-16 06:44 PM


Hi Ericc

there is so much within these few lines, that leaves the mind open....how beautiful a way to be reborn....

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2005-05-16 06:55 PM


Oh my!!!!   Beautiful!
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6 posted 2005-05-17 03:45 AM


beautiful~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Susan
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walking the surreal
7 posted 2005-05-17 10:48 AM


Oooooooooooh!

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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8 posted 2005-05-17 03:13 PM


You've captured that moment... beautiful! *S*
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9 posted 2005-05-17 04:44 PM


Yes, another wonderful write.  Thank you.
Margherita
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Eternity
10 posted 2005-05-18 06:28 PM



A few words conveying no less than the world ...

I love you.
Margherita

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11 posted 2005-05-21 04:58 PM


Timeless, that encounter that is indelible on the skin, and the heart.
TD

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12 posted 2005-05-23 12:58 PM


Touch of fingertips....nothing like it!

~ARH

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13 posted 2005-05-23 03:17 AM


wonderful
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