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latearrival
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0 posted 2005-05-16 01:45 PM


Ghosts

Ghosts dance around inside my mind,
They bring back yesteryears.

As I remember, I softly sigh, Oh - yes-
That must be why.

It seemed so senseless then
But now I understand.

I guess I am in a mellow state today, best marty

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-05-16 02:07 PM


mellow is as mellow does...enjoyed!
latearrival
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2 posted 2005-05-16 02:33 PM


Thank you Lee, marty
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3 posted 2005-05-16 07:47 PM


MartyJo~

*sighs* at my 'understanding' of this one~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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latearrival
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4 posted 2005-05-16 11:15 PM


Thank you Marge for reading. martyjo
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5 posted 2005-05-17 03:09 PM


If only time always brought understanding... sometimes I'm as baffled by the ghosts as I was when reality stood before me. *S*

I like this thought provoking piece very much! *S*

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6 posted 2005-05-17 03:37 PM


This one sure makes you stop and reflect.
Well done...very nice.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

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7 posted 2005-05-17 03:48 PM



I too, learn from the ghosties that haunt my head when I am in a reflective, mellow-jello state.  


Linda

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8 posted 2005-05-17 03:57 PM


Suthern, Nancy and Linda, Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. martyjo
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9 posted 2005-05-18 08:00 PM


a good heartfelt write here....love it
latearrival
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10 posted 2005-05-19 11:23 AM


Thank you Dixie. You are loved. marty
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11 posted 2005-05-20 11:30 AM


Fond memories are the best .
but sometimes the ugly ones can teach us even more.
very well done and yes "thought provoking"
adagio

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12 posted 2005-05-20 03:53 PM


Thank you Adagio, I appreciate your comments. Yes I have a lot of sad memories. When you have six children and get to be my age you would have to. But I chose to dwell on the good ones,It helps.best martyjo
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