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Raised Eyebrows of Society
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Raised Eyebrows of Society |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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hip reminder words walk concrete paths of someone elses’ wishing well... uttering differences, foreign languages that swear in four seasons redirecting those insane cruel innuendoes of shattered glass horrible noises with swollen eyes awarding guilt reasons to have an aversion to which plead with have to’s of all my catch phrases that can’t be seen better to feel nothing at all! what reassures are the “never lies” of silence… truth is influential strong written words from outreach programs damage control never seamed…to fit… blame came in slip of the tongue indecisions fear green envy i am unafraid to dream in my magic coat, yet to be on paper snapping furiously, the passions of it all please i do not feel your angel nor taste your sky when you go, i will not live in your mind but I do see your white sleep of which I’ve fallen from grace let me cry let me scream let me dream let me walk in lush emerson approachable i hope you understand my muse whispers with myriad form before my last chance is gone i cannot be in your memory of time nor your compressed feelings i still have questions to live still have petals in a shopping bag there’s an ocean standing outside my door attempting to reach me… i have to leave don’t be afraid a deeper song swims toward the light i make no promises perhaps if only a muffled cry catches the sea goose bumps carry me making no promises [This message has been edited by LeeJ (05-18-2005 01:44 PM).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
there are too many awesome lines here to pick favorites!!!!ack! WOW....this is too cool! I am saving this  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
this one reaches in deep - it speaks and tugs- like grabbing the hand and urging me follow - much enjoyed my friend -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"i still have questions to live still have petals in a shopping bag there’s an ocean standing outside my door attempting to reach me…" Excellent write Lee...so much enjoyed. Into my library this goes! Hugs~Nancy Life is one great big canvas; |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
there’s an ocean standing outside my door attempting to reach me… ~*~ So many times I have felt this pull... and I know when it reaches me, all I can hopefully do... is float!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
quote: ~ and that is one very good reason for learning how to swim! Both you and your pen stroke very well, indeed!  Swim on, m'friend! Linda |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Your words are an adventure...always. Eric |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Like SEA said, too many awesome lines to pick favourites...fantastic writing, i felt as though i could hear every thought. a  for sure  Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
awesome~ My spirit will rise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ "there’s an ocean standing outside my door attempting to reach me… i have to leave don’t be afraid a deeper song swims toward the light i make no promises" You write a sensitive goodbye. I admire the way you stay true to yourself. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you have this ability to write the emotions that touch the reader. Hugs Lee |
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