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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2005-05-15 10:31 PM

The first dew of morning beads, strung to dangle
Making damp the images beneath and hills between entangle
Laying quiet in the grass, listening to revival
Wiggling my toes, each breath my own survival
Spiriting a restlessness that calls in sea spray song
A missing part enflamed within the yearning heart so long
Rising to the welcome arms of forest set apart and green
Taking drink of all my eyes could bear to glean
The full of sun evaporating morning chill
And soon the layers shed in heavy spill
These watermarks that beg immerse to bathe
Without restraint exploring, imploring the release it gave
While soaking in emotions pooled in glistened wade
The brush around my waist a startled note was played
Relaxed, the lids of ebony daydreams rose
Sensations were supposed and peeking pray
As water lily smiled her broad grin just my way…
Soothing for a moments stay that thought unfurled
The waters swirled horizons pearled…
And lifting back my head to hear the poems be read
My neck entangled in the sweep of lip line thrills…
Shivering in Monarch trills
When we looked eye to eye in rapture

Copyright Kkh 05/15/05

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2005-05-15 10:58 PM

Hi Kathleen~

this is beautifully filled with love, desire and passion....

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-05-15 11:18 PM

Just lovely TD !! Enjoyed. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2005-05-16 04:01 PM

Beautiful write!

Eric

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

4 posted 2005-05-16 04:11 PM

Sensual and loaded with striking images.

believe in what your heart feels...

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

5 posted 2005-05-16 07:38 PM

Love it.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-05-17 05:26 AM

beautiful~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-05-17 08:10 AM

simply elegant and lovely

Aleta
Member

since 2005-04-17

Posts 102
Louisiana

8 posted 2005-05-17 09:20 AM

You portray the landscape of emotions well. Beautiful write!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2005-05-19 07:32 AM

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2005-05-19 10:30 AM

quote:
As water lily smiled her broad grin just my way…
Soothing for a moments stay that thought unfurled
The waters swirled horizons pearled…

Delightful poem, you have an immense treasure of words and images that you combine so beautifully.

Love, Margherita

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

11 posted 2005-05-19 10:35 AM

Reading you're poem, was like reading i don't know, the lines seemed to join together in a rhyming fashion that set off a little annoying repeative sense in my mind, not that it was bad just seemed to have that annoying pattern that makes reading it harder than it seems

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