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You were that Moment's Magic...
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You were that Moment's Magic... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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You were that Moment’s magic… Dappled me, you did…with sunlight and blue skies, mountainsides and memories… you were that moment’s magic when all the naysayers had to eat dry bread with no water…better than crow any time… you were that special air that carried our laughter to skies which shone down upon two girls from yesterday, even though we only strode memory lane…so much of our puzzled pieces fit the other’s life… You made me believe in twos… and veins of color beneath limbs of chance…held the belief just a little longer… How can I thank you… when you still deem, then smile, and lift me so?  Dappled me, you did, with evermores and twos… and the fact that our hands, in friendship… fit so well…Now, Then, Again... Love, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...How poignant and special, this poem is for me. I love you too!  |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
how poetically beautiful Karilea......  I came from the mountain |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
In agreement with Lauren. Hugs to you Karilea. Chrislane  Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Such a deep outpouring expressed with exquisite simplicity. Love your writing. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a very moving woven understanding...loved this emensely...thank you |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh wow...!!!! ! Eric |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Just beautiful, Karilea. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This has such an aura of gentle happiness...such moments are all too rare, but that isn't why they're treasured. They're treasured because they're treasure. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
What a talent...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Certainly a gift that will be treasured for many years to come...Well done Sun.... |
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MorninGlory Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 175Oklahoma |
Reading this makes me think about a friend I have that I haven't talked to in a while. I don't know what you had in mind when writing this, but there has to be something within all of us that can relate to your words. Without communion with another, there is so much less joy. And I imagine you gave much to the union - and the gift is in the giving. Thank you for your lovely words. becky |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh... how precious |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I am going to "ditto" Becky. You have written a beautiful tribute. best, marty |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
so incredibly beautiful - in heart, soul and images - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Achingly beautiful closing lines to a love-filled tribute. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Kari this is a beautiful gift to our Martie... you are both so beautiful.  Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I did not know it was to martie, but I did know it was just beautiful...your imagery is spectacular |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Beautiful, as so much of your poetry is, and a wonderful tribute to a friend, too... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You write not with common ink. You write with liquid gold from the glorious sun...  Love & Sun Light, Linda |
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