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latearrival
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0 posted 2005-05-14 01:14 PM



I am here
Yes, I will hug you
If that fits your needs.
I can hold you close,
And silently share your grief.
I don't mind watching over you,
as I sit listening to your silence.
My pain is as deep as yours,
As I have been in that darkest place.
So yes, rest your head ~
My shoulders are broad and strong.
I can handle horrid details,
It sometimes needs to be said out loud.
Spill over with black bile, I can sponge it off.
Then we can go on together......

But until I see some small sign from you,
That I am wanted
I stand timidly by your side.
I can not read so well,
That I can meet your needs.
Help me please
So I won't walk away.
Without you ever knowing..
I was there.
with love, marty

I wrote this in answer to a poem written in anguish about the sudden death of her son in a car accident.


© Copyright 2005 martyjo - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2005-05-14 01:35 PM


What a beautiful and heartfelt write..
you are filled with compassion, understanding and friendship.
Sending heart-hugs your way~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

latearrival
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2 posted 2005-05-14 01:40 PM


Thank you Nancy, I appreciate your reading and your answer.  martyjo
HopeS
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3 posted 2005-05-14 02:12 PM


Beautiful expressed caring heart  

Hope

latearrival
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4 posted 2005-05-14 06:54 PM


Hope, thank you for your kind comment. martyjo
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-05-17 12:48 PM


Enjoyed...James
latearrival
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6 posted 2005-05-17 01:33 AM


James, thank you for reading and commenting. martyjo
GG
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Lost in thought
7 posted 2005-05-17 08:41 PM


You obviously are a wonderful friend,
because the love and compassion spill out
in these words and on this page.


Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Martie
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8 posted 2005-05-17 09:12 PM


Marty...feeling the compassion in this!  
latearrival
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9 posted 2005-05-17 11:29 PM


Alyssa,What a nice thing to say. Thank you. Martie, I appreciate your response. Thank you, martyjo
passing shadows
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10 posted 2005-05-18 01:31 AM


Marty I read this earlier when you posted it. It is so beautiful, just like you.
latearrival
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11 posted 2005-05-18 06:01 AM


Dixie, you are posting! I was sure you were reading. Hope you are feeling better. Thanks for replying, YOU ARE LOVED, marty
LeeJ
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12 posted 2005-05-18 08:38 AM


this write was beautiful....thank you so much for sharing
scorpio
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right...there
13 posted 2005-05-18 09:03 AM


A very heartful and supportive write.

believe in what your heart feels...

latearrival
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14 posted 2005-05-18 10:51 AM


Lee and Scorpio, It means a lot to me to see you reading anything I have written. Thank you so much for responding, marty
passing shadows
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15 posted 2005-05-18 08:02 PM


yes Marty, I was reading, just not very much

I'm glad you're here

latearrival
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16 posted 2005-05-19 06:20 PM


Dixie,same feelings here. We need to know our loved ones are safe.  love, marty
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