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PazSqual
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since 2003-11-17
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0 posted 2005-05-14 09:23 AM



Numbness

Please forgive me if I sound a little sad
Under the circumstances I am doing great
But you see the feelings in my heart have gone away
My blood feels cold running through my veins
My entire world has just gone numb



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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-05-14 09:30 AM


PazSqual
Give it a little while, it will go away.
Enjoyed

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
2 posted 2005-05-14 09:47 AM


Let the warmth of a sunny day renew your feelings.  Well written.

believe in what your heart feels...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2005-05-14 10:03 AM


I can understand the description written so well in your art.  I guess the difference between pain and numbness is the degree of nurturing and rejuvination that beats within the depths of that relationship that is mourning.  We all deserve the time we need to heal...but love will never leave you empty...and someone who loves you will never demand or betray...they will simply stand close and support you on your journey.
*S*  You sure do have a knack for drawing out the considerations Paz!
Nice write.
TD

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