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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-05-13 06:43 AM



there were waterfalls
on the walls
of our thoughts
but we made more
sinful water

you were pale places
with clouds
for my hands to wander
and secrets for my fingers
to pretend they were eyes

exploring your geography
and you said my way
of getting there was new
to the trails of you
much slower than usual

and every thing I touched
seemed to be special
after the electricity
was turned off
and it was left to cool

at the edge of my darkness


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dark

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-05-13 07:04 AM


theres a place where two go, that carry's on, long after the physical...which is in fact, even more powerful then the physical...
Yes, indeedy...yes, indeed

Morning D..., your spirit world is showing?


Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-05-13 07:37 AM


Yes, Lee...

it is showing...

as he is one, don't y'know?


Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-05-13 10:23 AM


this is sooo beautiful - D - you do weave magic in your words and cast a spell of sensual and loving - love your eyes

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
4 posted 2005-05-13 10:46 AM


WOW!!! You sure know how to turn on the electricty....

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