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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-05-13 04:38 AM


From knights they came,
educated, wordly, witty, valued
at court, travelling, always
searching. Love their motoivation,
romantic, heroic love, deep.
Proving their love, for
love of their ladies.
Distant, elevated she sits,
beautiful, virtuous, expert women,
of manners, customs, of
courtly society, culture, life.
Humble servant he is,
his honour to be
rewarded with her love.
Wonderfully painfull is his
love, that brings joy
unconfined, suffering all hurt,
nothing breaks his love.

Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt)

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2005-05-13 04:45 AM


Now This is more like it, my kind of poem...knights...and love....the bravery of both!

Enjoyed~

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

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just out of reach
2 posted 2005-05-13 07:40 AM


Agreeing with ARH here....very lovely.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

MGROVES
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california
3 posted 2005-05-13 08:13 PM


yes this is great~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2005-05-16 07:49 AM



~ and YOU are one of PiP's finest of troubadours! Your poetry sings, Sir Knight!


EA


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2005-05-16 11:13 AM


And a steadfast troubadour you are Sir Golden.
Wonderful write.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

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