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CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
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Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2005-05-12 06:02 PM



While passion follows many hues and shades,
The burning crimson red is known the best;
When all the others’ passing rainbow fades
This only one will never fail the test.
When crimson passion spreads its burning ache
And fills your veins with searing lava flow —
When whispers deep ignite a tremor’s quake,
Within you feel the heat of ageless glow -
Then do not ban this torrid heat that fills
Your heart and soul with flame of love’s desire —
But stay and deep inhale its drops and spills
And barefoot dance in burning flames of fire:
For if away you turn and close your eyes -
Then you shall miss the Light of Paradise.

CG

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2005-05-12 06:12 PM


~~A Knight who knows how
to heighten thy words of feel~~

Lady O

ps once again I forgot  who I was

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-13-2005 07:21 AM).]

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-05-12 11:39 PM




Love knows no know other color,
for mine is always glowing red,
Holding the "light of paradise",
inside my heart,passion burns from
your words that I have read..

~ARH


"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-05-13 09:51 AM


I gift thee with this crimson rose for the glorious poems of love that thy fine quill does spill.  Flowers

EA

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-05-13 09:56 AM


Beautiful penning.  
CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
Posts 760
Alberta, Canada
5 posted 2005-05-13 07:37 PM



Thank you..um...Lady O...

ARH - Yes, I know your color - and thank you for the words, glad they could be fuel...

Linda - thank you for the crimson rose - I shall keep it on my desk(top)

Gentle Spirit - thank you for the kind words.

CG

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