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Open Poetry #35

Those Three Words

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2005-05-12 12:13 PM

It almost slipped a couple times
three words i almost said
My heart and mouth were screaming YES!
but NO! reverbed inside my head.
Feelings felt but never spoken
it pains me not to say
Those three words i wanted to
just the other day

june 30, 01

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
-Godsmack
"If who i am is what i have, and what i have is lost...then who am i?"
(I Ride The Short Bus)

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2005-05-12 12:18 PM

Wow.. That was good. So much was said. Well I have a thing for short poems!/... Enjoyed nuch (;

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-05-12 12:21 PM

Awesome short write. Much enjoyed. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-05-12 12:37 PM

beatiful...and heart provoking,

but I don't believe any stone should be left unturned...saying what you feel, opens doors...especially when we view them at the time as loss...hugs to you

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

4 posted 2005-05-12 04:09 PM

Loved it! I too have a thing for short poems.
adagio

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-05-12 04:20 PM

Excellent write..and you will say those three words when the time is right.

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

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