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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-05-12 09:27 AM


Positive Addiction – spiritual journey

she owns fine voice today
hand painting a shopper’s image
revealing an insider’s view
disregarding, mind-set of acid rain
not forbidden, by self serving motives

first things first…
               she ponders learning
how to leave her cage, by building a connection
grabbing the golden ring from the carousel
threads corroboration and
               the greatest story ever told

finding the key to utopia
               where there’s always room for one more
and spawned an existent place…

is understanding there is no payoff
yet, strength giving addictions
become imagination with voice
so, I’m buying someone else’s happy
the learning skills are inspirational
it’s merely a lifetime course
               with a great cup of coffee

she needs to be, what no one understands
her one true friend…fulfilling missions that wait
with the beauty of the world
knocking at her door…risking all
caring more, then others think is safe
                oh the wonder lust of autonomy

there is a common source of intoxication
mundane accommodation at the common place
all enclusive
there is nothing higher...no better face
                 and ya don't need a wallet to prove it

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1 posted 2005-05-12 09:36 AM


she needs to be, what no one understands
her one true friend…fulfilling missions that wait
with the beauty of the world
knocking at her door…risking all
caring more, then others think is safe
                

Lee, this verse does it for me.........
and you? are a wonderful friend,
and I enjoyed this write, very much. Hugs.

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2 posted 2005-05-12 10:08 AM


              she ponders learning
how to leave her cage, by building a connection
grabbing the golden ring from the carousel
threads corroboration and
               the greatest story ever told
Lee this is utterly amazing. Thankyou for this today. hugs, Chris    p.s. keepin' this!

JL
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3 posted 2005-05-12 10:25 AM


The following verse you wrote is so profound; this write goes in a frame:


"with the beauty of the world
knocking at her door…risking all
caring more, then others think is safe
oh the wonder lust of autonomy"


Excellent write Lee J.

JL


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4 posted 2005-05-12 10:40 AM


yet, strength giving addictions
become imagination with voice

~*~

Dang it gal....

thank you!

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