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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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Farewell, saying I am to part may be the hardest motion in my liquid body, hung to dry, but I never cease to move, moaning in hymn, I will shut off this brightly burning sun I would not miss it at all. You hope I evaporate into nothing, and I suppose I can understand, too many times have I wondered about you what was not my concern, I tried to venture deeply where I'll never belong. But your skin is tender perfect for digging, and I'm begging to be explorative and insane within you. For simply one moment, let your gaurd down free yourself of armour. I will break the wall between us. For now I've discovered passion lying deep within my personal ocean my body and my soul. I must venture into your blood. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
i could feel the passion in this all the way to my heart. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"But your skin is tender perfect for digging, and I'm begging to be explorative and insane within you." WOW I liked that line... reminded me of when I met my husband  I really loved this Kaoru, thanks for sharing it with us !! Tima I may hate myself in the morning - but I'm gonna love you tonight |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
OMG woman, you amaze...  this is perfection, I intend to keep! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"You hope I evaporate into nothing, and I suppose I can understand, too many times have I wondered about you what was not my concern, I tried to venture deeply where I'll never belong." nodding in empathetic understanding and? good luck with the armor... in my case? I lost because of the quality of his mail--forged by his mother yanno.  You delve deep m'lady, and I'd not fence with you.  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So glad this one came back to the top Meg, a deeply passionate write gal. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was amazingly beautiful..... But your skin is tender perfect for digging, and I'm begging to be explorative and insane within you. and then this......... For simply one moment, let your gaurd down free yourself of armour. I will break the wall between us. then to end it, this........ For now I've discovered passion lying deep within my personal ocean my body and my soul. I must venture into your blood. Gwad girl, you rip away at raw and brutally honest emotions...how I love your work, intensely seductive with powerful suggestions...profound, you are, simply profound... |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked the style you wrote this one. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
This is very cool. Well understood. |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Lets hope letting the guard down is easier than it sounds .Very much enjoyed this one. :} Will save this one adagio |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
meg... you still write with blood... upon the onion skin's paper |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"For simply one moment, let your gaurd down free yourself of armour. I will break the wall between us."  love this! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
rereading this again...so many fantastic lines/images. "I will shut off this brightly burning sun I would not miss it at all." ...oh!! and: "But your skin is tender perfect for digging, and I'm begging to be explorative and insane within you." ...strike the hammers! you. are. good. enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! A fantastic write with such inner passion!! Excellent Meghan. Hugs~Nancy Life is one great big canvas; |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I will shut off this brightly burning sun oh what a vision...yes ma'am! keeping this M "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Stellar writing, Miz Megs Evocative, as you can see from the replies above. Expressive And hopeful |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I must venture into your blood." ~ Oh, yes! I know that feeling! Sometimes "close" is just not close enough! lol Passion flows from you like lava from an active Mount Vesuvius!  EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Copper tinged sheets hung to dry my eyes, I speak to no one. The walls - my therapy, and one day you will hand me a clothespin. -------------------------------------- (beautiful writing, Meg, as always) |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
glad i stopped by, beautiful~ My spirit will rise |
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